From Rob:

I wrote a letter to my god daughter, now 18 and departing for her senior year retreat, based on her mother’s vague guidelines: memories, support, humor, love. It was well received. My "editors" think a wider audience would appreciate it; I think it lacks the background details and context that a reader would need. Do I add those at the risk of ruining the piece? How do I judge if something this personal has appeal outside the recipient?

Dear Rob –  We should all have godfathers like you. What a terrific idea. I agree with your “editors”, a wider audience would be interested. I’m not sure though that you need much context or background details. The fact that you’re her godfather says a lot and your message to her is what’s important.  The specific memories will automatically create context – and support, humor and love is something we’re all looking for. You’ll be able to judge if it has appeal outside the recipient when you send it out to magazines and newspapers and see what kind of response you get. Good luck with it and let me know when you get it published. (And check out online Anne Lamott’s wonderful commencement address.)