Personal Essays

The Zazzle Feud

  I’m having a fight with an on-line company called Zazzle and spending inordinate amounts of time on it. Either I’m crazy or they are. I ordered the above mug for my Arrowhead retreat next weekend and fourteen mugs arrived but not in the size I ordered. They were 8 ounce mugs and I had…

Cooking Essays

  I have an essay in a book that’s just been published - The Art of Grandparenting, edited by Valerie Connelly.  You can find it on Amazon. The essay is called “Knocked Sideways by Love” and it’s about my relationship with that perfect and beloved trio: Emma, Axel and Grace.   Writing longer essays for anthologies…

The Rejected Essay Graveyard

I just went through my rejected essay graveyard. There’s one about a white river rafting trip that I sent to every newspaper and magazine I could think of – and it was rejected time after time. Rereading the essay, I can understand why. The ending has everything but the seven dwarfs singing to the birds.…

THE NEXT STEP: Writing Your Personal Essay

This is part of my article on writing the personal essay that will appear in The Writer Magazine next March.  ___________________________________________________________________ Step Four: Rewriting       Remember: writing is rewriting.       First, look at the opening paragraph of your essay. Do you pull the reader in right away?  Do the first sentences set up…

The Heart of Your Essay

Step Three        Emotion is at the heart of your personal essay. You need to feel deeply about your subject, whether it’s crazed frustration over something trivial, or a deeper emotion about a serious subject. This emotion can come out of wanting to maintain dignity while things beyond your control are falling apart (often…

A Photograph of My Mother and Al

_________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for all your comments left after the last post about Al. Your thoughts and condolences were moving and comforting and much appreciated by everyone in my family.  I didn’t have a digital photo of Al and my mother to post so today I took a picture of a photograph of them with…